I am all yours

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    I am all yours

    Darkness behind the windows pane
    Returns me back a part of mine
    With it’s weak reflection.
    I still hear your whisper:
    Come near my dear
    I thirst your kisses.
    And words burst on pieces.
    They are hot and tender, passionate and boldly
    It takes out of me whole my spirit and body.
    The fear disappears about unknown future beyond well known past…
    When true love appears when eternity lasts.
    I am so scared… If you only know
    How apart my willing be yours but be all myself.
    Rescue my feeling from my own desires!
    I am just free spirit as a wind as a moth
    But I am all yours!!!
    And my heart is beating faster
    Freedom is love disaster.
    The marvelous luster!
    As a broken button past now apart from present,
    With it’s unknown secrets…
    Give me one more day, give me one more night
    With a brightest light
    Come closer and closer
    On my daydream
    And simply whisper
    Just near my ear
    How much you care about me!!!

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    kdarcy commented on I am all yours

    07-23-2010

    I enjoyed the read, some great lines, I agree with the other comments as well. Thanks
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    charmlessman2d commented on I am all yours

    04-05-2010

    love the sultry seductive nature of this beast here. for some reason it reminds me of old ninteenth century setting somewhere where dangerous liasons and queen victoria stories take place. where sexual nature was a thing of romance and could still be taken into gut-wrenching yet flowery aspects. these days sex is a raunchy scandal with no romance, just hearsay and ugly words used to describe lewd acts. this piece takes me back to the days when lust would be on the same wagon with love and seduction. goodjob
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    dahlusion commented on I am all yours

    12-23-2008

    nicely crafted
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    Ron commented on I am all yours

    11-29-2008

    a dark love? a shadow of a promise?
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    drbiggerthomas commented on I am all yours

    11-10-2008

    No this is not a ten....... you can do better
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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