I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE

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  • Inspirational

    I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE

     i can't hold anymore,
    i am lost in my pain 
    i am searching for you
    take me in your arms
    and take away my sorrows

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    Chaos128 commented on I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE

    12-02-2010

    A very stylized and evocative epigram, terse and direct. I'm a little confused, though, over your tagging it "inspirational".
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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    I CAN'T HOLD ON ANYMORE 1 12/02/2010
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    LOOK UP 1 11/02/2009
    BLACK WORMS 1 10/15/2009
    SO LONELY 0 10/15/2009
    NOT IN CONTROL 0 10/15/2009
    BLACKNESS 0 10/15/2009
    ALL THE WORLD IS INSANE 1 03/04/2009
    FUTURE 0 03/04/2009
    IMMORTAL WHISPERS 1 03/03/2009
    DEAD WITHOUT YOU 0 03/03/2009
    TEARS NO LONGER FLOW 0 03/03/2009
    COLD WINTER 1 03/03/2009
    WASTELAND 0 03/03/2009
    I AM THE VICTIM 0 03/03/2009
    I SCREAM DO YOU HEAR ME 2 03/03/2009
    SOMETIMES 0 03/03/2009
    DRIVING 0 03/03/2009
    TEARS FROM THE SOUL 0 03/03/2009
    PAINTING ON EMPTY CANVAS 0 03/03/2009
    NOTHING IS THERE 1 03/03/2009
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