i have something to say

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    Everyone knows your nothing but a sleeze
    a con
    a mess
    a lie
    a joke
    They see right through that disgusting hoax
    "that skank"
    "that slut"
    they say it behind your back
    they'd love to see you fall
    so dont give them the reason to call
    stand strong
    stand proud
    dont give up
    be real
    stop faking
    love, who loves you back
    un-dig that hole you're hiding in
    release the real you
    be free
    be strong
    dont let them call you the something your not anymore

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    BringMeBullets commented on i have something to say

    03-04-2010

    Hmmm. A great write. It's so powerful. I like it because it shows that you always stand up for yourself. Labels don't matter in the end... It's who you are, not what other people think you are.
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    cherise1 commented on i have something to say

    03-02-2010

    in all perspectives... i just heard your poetry, made into a wicked sweet rap. no words edited, just spit with a beat. pretty cool and keep up the great work here (-: catch ya later
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    dahlusion commented on i have something to say

    03-02-2010

    Whom ever you friend is, this is solid and truthful advice. Bravo!
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    Musicmynded1 commented on i have something to say

    03-02-2010

    Yep!... just like i thought, a very intriguing write,,,, ill def b back to read more
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    kpeery09 commented on i have something to say

    01-22-2010

    I like this, Very detailed, and its all very nice. I give you 10 for this one
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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