No ones alone

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    • JudeDruid
    • May 19th is approaching so fast! -gaspers- I love you Zaq!

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    This is for you, Tay <3

    No ones alone

    darkness outlines the faint, wicked smile on your face
    my hands plunge into your hair as you kiss my lips
    the everlasting love
    and the regret of falling
    all mixed into one bowl
    your skin feels of slik
    yet the electricity moves through us like we're made of butter
    i can't help but love you
    i can't help but to feel like i'm your personal superhero
    you treat me so right
    and i can't help but to awe your every movment
    I'm sorry i'm so in love
    but you're worth it in every way
    baby be mine forever
    help me wash away this pain

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    WordSlinger commented on No ones alone

    03-04-2010

    Shall you two keep bathing, like in that first line here, you wont have no pain, deeply felt here, Good write, ty WS
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    BringMeBullets commented on No ones alone

    03-04-2010

    Aww. It's precious. Pure emotion. I love the way it flows so perfectly. And the descriptions are perfect. Great write.
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    sk8ergirl commented on No ones alone

    03-03-2010

    cool peom................i love it a lot of emotion.........sk8
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    leigh14 commented on No ones alone

    03-03-2010

    omg dud ethis is one of the best poems ive ever read
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    Starella15 commented on No ones alone

    02-12-2010

    Great Write. I LOVE it. :o))))))))) Keep Writing i love to read your writing
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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