I Miss You

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    I Miss You

    I’m missing you and that’s the hardest thing for me to do. I miss you telling me all the things I want to hear. I miss you pulling me close to you holding me so dear. I miss you gazing into my eyes. I miss you giving me that mysterious look and I wonder why.

     

    I miss you why can’t I be where you are? I miss you I can’t stand to be away from you this far. I miss you I want to look into your eyes. I miss you is there a knot we both can tie? I miss you the pain is hurting and it’s for real. I miss you and the times we laid back and chill. I miss you, falling asleep in each others arms. I miss you, cuddling together keeping each other warm.

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    ansari commented on I Miss You

    07-18-2010

    Yeah very emotional,retrospective,nostalgic. great, nice flow of words. thank you, a 10 from me.
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    anderneglakay commented on I Miss You

    08-07-2009

    i miss you to i which i can be near you soon, i miss u to looking at your picture is not good enough no more, i miss u to your poem is so lovely make me miss you with out even knowing you keep up the great work keep touch people life in your own special way .
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    Beagle commented on I Miss You

    06-03-2009

    written as a story, use poetry stanza. this is more like a letter than a poem...look up the definition of a poem...
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    lovelypoet79

    06/04/2009

    Poetry is a creative expression of oneself...no matter what form it comes in it's still poetry...do your history on poetry...that's jus like poetry doesn't have to rhyme..but it still poetry if it doesn't po·em [pṓ əm] (plural po·ems) n 1. piece written in verse: a complete and self-contained piece of writing in verse that is set out in lines of a set length and uses rhythm, imagery, and often rhyme to achieve its effect 2. writing with poetic effect: a piece of writing that is n

    lemons7587 commented on I Miss You

    06-03-2009

    This was good. possibly good song lyrics? Overall, It was a good read. It made feel like it could've been longer. I wanted to hear more. Hence, that's why you gave it the title i miss you. Not only is it straight forward, but it leaves you wanting to hear more. Thanks for sharing that one.
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    lovelypoet79

    06/04/2009

    Thank you.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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