I want you.

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This is about the boy i want my Boyfriend. Yet i know he will never date me he knows i like him. He never talks to me anymore though. Well he only talks to me when none of his friends are around.

I want you.

You caught my eye first glance.
Your tan skin,
Your smile,
Your eyes.
For that i knew something.
I want you.
To be your girl.
Why your eyes could make my heart melt.
Yet i cant love back.
I want you mine.
The way we would look together.
Would be great.
Yet you would look bad with the freak.
Still.
I can't help that i want you.
I Smile a small smile.
Yet you ingnore me.
Then a few days later.
I catch your eyes staring down my legs.
Did you want me then.
I stood still leaning all my weight on my right hip.
Then as i finshing my way down the hall.
I feel you eyes on the back of me.
Problely wishing my skirt was shorter.
I still want you.
Wanting to lean over one day and kiss you.
Then people would me ever freaker.
Then i could stop my wanting you.
Want knowing i cant have drives me nuts.

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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