I Wish

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    I Wish

    I wish you were here,
    to take away the pain.
    The pain you left me with,
    when you left me all alone.

    I wish you were here,
    to dry all my tears.
    The times we had,
    will never be forgotten.

    We have both moved on,
    but alone I still feel,
    without you here by my side.
    I wish you were here.

    I wish I could turn back
    the hands of time,
    for if I could,
    I would take back all
    of the mistakes I made.

    I wish you were here,
    to hold me tight
    and see you in the morning light.
    You are my first love,
    and I wish you were here.

    I hear the songs,
    that remind me of you.
    I hear your voice,
    whispering in the wind.
    I loved you then and,
    I love you now.
    I WISH YOU WERE HERE!

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    C2J commented on I Wish

    05-17-2009

    uses alot of repeats and cliches

    Spiralout1022 commented on I Wish

    04-02-2009

    hits close to home i feel like if my girl read this poem shed have some sort of breakdown.. which always makes me have a breakdown, i can easily relate

    fennesse commented on I Wish

    03-20-2009

    fourthcoming,honest I know you have much more to come I anticipate them.

    Phoenix9 commented on I Wish

    03-20-2009

    very nice poem, nice flow to it

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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