I Wish

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  • Lost Love

    I Wish

    I wish I could have told you
    How I really felt inside
    I wish I could've been there for you
    On the day that you died
    Why did you leave me?
    Don't you think I cared?
    I wish I could hold you
    And now you're not there.
    Where did u get the gun?
    Why didnt you talk to me?
    I wanted to spend my life with you
    And now that will never be.

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    Phoenix9 commented on I Wish

    07-17-2009

    so much could change if we all talked about things, and were open, left with a loss that should never have been. good write
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    WinterFrost commented on I Wish

    07-12-2009

    Suicide is always very sad. I empathise with you over your loss.
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    bforibus commented on I Wish

    07-12-2009

    I feel the deep regret in this poem. although short it was very powerful. it felt strong yet vulnerable. love the contrast of emotions that was put into these words. great job
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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