If He only Knew

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    If He only Knew

    It has only been moments since I felt his warmth against my body

    If he only knew how it feels when I rest my head against his chest

    His sweet breath caressing me

    His strong arms protecting me

    The joy I feel when I see him laughing and smiling

    The pain I feel when he’s sad

    If he only knew, knew how much….

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    AshRenee commented on If He only Knew

    07-31-2009

    If you feel this strongly about him, I'm sure he feels the same of you. A really sweet poem, and I love it
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    MonkeyLover

    07/31/2009

    He does love me too thank God. It's been 14 years of true love. Thank you for your comments. They mean a lot coming from you because your a great poet. I have really enjoyed reading your stuff. Keep it up.

    TwistedAce commented on If He only Knew

    07-30-2009

    Perfect! Nothing more needs to be said in this poem to convey your feelings to the reader. From the opposites sex point of view, there is nothing better than to have a women feel this way towards you......
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    MonkeyLover

    07/30/2009

    Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them.

    1Love commented on If He only Knew

    07-30-2009

    I agree with other comments; it's a little short. however still very well writtten.
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    lonewolf commented on If He only Knew

    07-29-2009

    good writing, but I wish it were longer. I was just getting into it when it ended.
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    1990lh commented on If He only Knew

    07-29-2009

    ver nice job, it was sweety and full of love. and i must say i do love your style please keep up the geat work.
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    MonkeyLover

    07/30/2009

    Your comments are so encouraging; thank you so much.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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