I'm here...

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  • Devotion

    I'm here...

    I just think that your scared
    Me to but I'm here
    With my fears, I'm right here
    Blood, sweat, and my tears
    Love and Hate through the years
    All alone with my tears
    Anger for no real reason
    Still I endure through the seasons
    Hot summers leave flames burning
    Spring filled with many showers
    Fall is my time of year
    My heart is open, I'm thinking clear
    Winter is to cold to bare
    But even then I'm still here
    With my fears and my Faith
    Our l♥ve, u can't erase
    try if you may, but cant replace
    So take my hand and embrace it
    Take your time..my heart is patient
    Our imperfections, makes the fit Perfect
    The kind of l♥ve WE share
    Makes the rainy days worth it
    Never said I was perfect
    In my eyes your worth it
    So until I'm cold and motionless
    My Love & devotion is relentless...


    1♥3


    -Patiently Waiting, P.C.

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    terrellharrisjr commented on I'm here...

    05-16-2009

    Our imperfections, makes the fit Perfect. A 10 to me for that line alone. The vulnerability you show proves that the love is real. Going into my favs.

    Ace212121 commented on I'm here...

    02-19-2009

    Very nice poem. From Ace.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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