In A World Like This

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In A World Like This



In a world like this
You have to think positive
To experience all the good things in life
Is your own perogative
In a world like this
You have to be strong
To just be yourself
Try to get along
In a world like this
You have to survive
To learn to live
Be more than just alive
In a world like this
You may cry many tears
You have to fulfil your dreams
Overcome your fears
In a world like this
There is war and peace
But it is more love of our hearts
We need to release
In a world like this
There is a lot of greed
But there is more to life
Than just to succeed
In a world like this
You have to take a look around
To open your heart and mind
To explore
Everything that there is to be found
In a world like this

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mmichelle97219 commented on In A World Like This

02-16-2009

Its okay. There is an uneven meter, but that only hinders the poem very little. I thought it was pretty good. It has the potential to be fantastic if you fix the meter problem. I suggest writing to a beat in your head. Happy Writing Michelle

Paradice21 commented on In A World Like This

11-20-2008

Very Meaningful poem. I will have to read more. There's alot of great poets on writers on this site but some just stick with me more.Maybe it's there passion for living and true love for written. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

Lois commented on In A World Like This

11-09-2008

Enjoyed your poem, very good. Bless you.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Prize72’s Poems (16)

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Midst 1
What it is 0
Good Bye 0
Us Again 0
In A World Like This 3
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Determined I am 0
I Wish I Were 0
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Fine China 0
You and Me 0
No longer 0
Maximum Security 0
Hush 0
My worst Enemy 1
Beauty 0