In your existence

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    In your existence
    They say misery loves company,
    this I deem true
    Especially when you can’t explain,
    why you feel the way you do.

    Trying to make you happy
    Has become such a task
    Now in your existence
    I wear the misery mask

    I fight with the inner me
    Trying to decide whether to go or stay
    You say that you love me,
    But I don’t think you do

    The decision is becoming clearer,
    with each and every day.
    I asked my Father up above,
    and he said to move away.

    I wish it could be different,
    although I know that it can’t.
    because in your existence
    There is no more space.

    So move on I shall
    For my struggle is over
    I will live for my father
    Until this life is over.

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    LIFECHANGES commented on In your existence

    06-03-2009

    Been there and have had my share of the same thing. I stayed there 4 almost 20 yrs. I finally left and i have b-come stronger fo it! Keep up the good work...!
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    BLASTHEME commented on In your existence

    05-31-2009

    Truly beautiful, and expressive of ordeals that are happening everyday and at times we get caught up in people and emotions and the daily rigors of trying to make it to another day, that sometimes we need to take a breather and remember the real center of our focus which you pointed out in this. 10 from me great write Please feel free to come thru and peep some or all(lol..smile) of my work as well..my lights are always on, if not, I'll make sure to keep then on for you...smile Peace BLAS
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    concience commented on In your existence

    04-29-2009

    i admire the strength of your back bone. keep the pen moving and eventually you will too! you are beautiful inside and out.
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    organicchick commented on In your existence

    04-22-2009

    If you are in a relationship and feel alone, you are better off alone!!! (although we are never really alone) Good write!
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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