Incomplete

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    Incomplete

    A thousand people

    all around

    tear me down.

    A thousand words

    I could say

    but that doesn't make things okay.

    If all thats left

    in me

    makes me cry

    and my body weak

    could I ever find

    the strength again?

    I feel the distance

    when we're so close

    I felt alive

    and yet a ghost

    and in me

    crippled

    my soul inside

    the love comes out in every

    tear I cry

    but some tears stay

    and do not leave

    and I'm loving you

    incomplete

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    Qualin commented on Incomplete

    05-14-2011

    I CAN RELATE A GOOD, DEEP WRITE SEEMED TO COME FROM THE HEART....QUALIN
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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