Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris)

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this is what happens when i try to help him with his h.w.

Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris)

"I'm going to recite,
And you're going to write it." 
That's what she said to me.

I didn't get excited,
I definetely tried to fight it,
But obviously that couldn't be.

"Try to pay attention",
She forgot to mention.
She nearly forgot what she thought.

She told me go faster.
I said to her,"Yes master".
I made a face and nearly got caught.

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cutbanksam commented on Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris)

02-09-2011

The life of a child explained in a short poem. At least one important aspect of such life.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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Journal ( feat. my baby bro chris) 1
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