Life

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  • cntleavealne
  • lovin life wit my new family member and my fiancee

Life

Life is a road that is twisted and turned

Children of the sun grow up and get burned

We should treasure our past but still travel light

And beware of who's doors we knoch in the night

I know I have friends, I'm never alone

But I'm a wonderer,

The road is my home

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WhisperingWind commented on Life

06-22-2009

Very short...and great! Sometimes to me short poems are more dramatic than long ones!!! Keep it up!

MsKrystle commented on Life

06-22-2009

I like this one....short and sweet....I like the way you compare life to a twisted road, that is so true. Nice work

Morris commented on Life

06-22-2009

short and sweet i'm not sure if the person is lonely or just alone either one can be bad but lonely is worse---M

jenniferlopez1 commented on Life

06-22-2009

great pome, I like how you use your words. Keep up the good work.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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