Life

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    Life

    Life is a road that is twisted and turned

    Children of the sun grow up and get burned

    We should treasure our past but still travel light

    And beware of who's doors we knoch in the night

    I know I have friends, I'm never alone

    But I'm a wonderer,

    The road is my home

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    WhisperingWind commented on Life

    06-22-2009

    Very short...and great! Sometimes to me short poems are more dramatic than long ones!!! Keep it up!
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    MsKrystle commented on Life

    06-22-2009

    I like this one....short and sweet....I like the way you compare life to a twisted road, that is so true. Nice work
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    Morris commented on Life

    06-22-2009

    short and sweet i'm not sure if the person is lonely or just alone either one can be bad but lonely is worse---M
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    jenniferlopez1 commented on Life

    06-22-2009

    great pome, I like how you use your words. Keep up the good work.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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