Loss of a Loved One

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  • cntleavealne
  • lovin life wit my new family member and my fiancee

Loss of a Loved One

I lost control over my feelings for you
I thought we pulled it through
I guess it wasn't true

I'm so bitter so cold
Now I have no one to hold
I have been told

I thought that we'd last forever
But that forever is gone
I knew I did something wrong

I never meant for this to happen
When all I thought of was never ending love
I love you with all my heart
I should've been smart

I regret the things I've done
But baby please don't leave me alone
I hurt so much inside
That I know I lied

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StandingBear commented on Loss of a Loved One

06-23-2009

To love and lost is at least much better than to have never experienced this great feeling before. Great write. 10

dustyrebel70 commented on Loss of a Loved One

06-22-2009

Such a heart wrenching experience for you. I thought you used nice imagery and it was from the heart. Good poem

cliftondurant commented on Loss of a Loved One

06-22-2009

IT hurt when you broke up with someone you love your heart ache for true love good poem

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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