Look at yourself

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  • cntleavealne
  • lovin life wit my new family member and my fiancee

Look at yourself

All by myself
In this life alone
Forever by myself
In this world to roam

You inder judge me,
As if I'm not here
Not only when your sober,
But your worse with your beer

It's stupid how you did this,
You changed your normal daughter,
She used to look up to you,
But now your the last person in her head as a rolemodel

Her life of happiness
Is so far gone
You turn her smile upside down

So instead of ruining mine and making it so strife
Look at yours and what you do,
Get yourself a life

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StandingBear commented on Look at yourself

06-23-2009

A great stand up write. I love your independent fire that lights the way to your discovered path.

WhisperingWind commented on Look at yourself

06-22-2009

I like it alot, I can feel the emotions you are talking about... Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you

WinterFrost commented on Look at yourself

06-22-2009

Rage! Excellent. Complacency is the little death that creeps up on you by inches. Refute and tell them where to go Good work

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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