Life's Lesson

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    • Laurie
    • is grateful for life and words that bring abundant life...

    Life's Lesson
    Butterflies silently rising
    fluttering
    in an iridescent sunlight
    soft wings lifting in silence
    a life lesson
    a marvelous treasure
    a remembrance
    of a forgotten
    struggle
    Life begins...

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    chrysanthemum commented on Life's Lesson

    12-12-2009

    short, but when you think about it, it means a lot. beautifully written.
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    Wallysaruman commented on Life's Lesson

    07-30-2009

    Beautiful. So full of wisdom and peace in such a short poem...
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    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Thank you so much for your comment...it touch my heart!

    dahlusion commented on Life's Lesson

    02-12-2009

    The simplicity here lifts me like a butterfly
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    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    aaaah, your comment is so touching...Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words! Be blessed!

    hoovstir commented on Life's Lesson

    02-11-2009

    Simple and powerful...wow!
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    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Yes, simplitiy often creates the element of being more powerful. THANKS for noticing!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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