Thoughts of You...

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    • Laurie
    • is grateful for life and words that bring abundant life...

    Thoughts of You...

    Writing thoughts
    as words sway the melodies
    in lyrical stories
    forming rhythmic sounds of desire
    Songs softly laughing the rhyme
    of a delicious madness
    Listen to the syllables of love
    Telling my mind each note swarming around in my head
    Words of meaning that creates the tune
    I hear
    as dancing sentences fill each thought
    Listen to the melodies hidden in my mind
    For at last, my thoughts have found a singing voice
    a dancing tune of happiness'
    while playing the syllables of love
    as I sit here
    writing thoughts of you

    © Laurie

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    kdarcy commented on Thoughts of You...

    04-25-2009

    Like that, simply stated, easily read and enjoyed

    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Thanks for your kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed it!

    dahlusion commented on Thoughts of You...

    02-12-2009

    Sweet, simply sweet!

    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Thak you...I appreciate your comments. Have a wonderful day!

    hoovstir commented on Thoughts of You...

    02-11-2009

    I like this! It makes me happy and full of anticipation.

    Laurie

    08/01/2009

    Thank you your comment. I am glad it moved you and made you happy.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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