Like Rain

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    Like Rain

    Ashley my dear
    Won't you come with me
    Theres something I wanna show you
    Remember that old tree by the fence
    I think it's waiting for us

    Everything I see
    Reminds me of you
    I just can't let you go

    When the road gets dark
    And you can no longer see
    And we are, are so far.
    Just put some faith in me.
    And I want you to know
    I will never let you go.
    Because every single day
    Is like rain

    Falling down ontop of my head
    I wasn't expecting no more
    The lateness of the hour
    Is always a dread
    The moment i've been waiting for.

    You were my best friend
    The light that lit my candle
    My soft and cuddly teddy bear
    You are my angel

    But you can't always see
    What you've done to me.
    All the exciting...memories

    When the road gets dark
    And you can no longer see.
    And we are, are so far
    Just put some faith in me

    And I want you to know
    I will never let you go
    Because every single day
    Is like rain

    I can hear it pouring down
    When every second goes by.
    And I don't hear a sound
    I look up in the sky.
    But I can't take no more
    I need you by my side
    You see the stars in the sky
    Our chance is passing by

    So i got down on one knee
    And I looked into your eyes
    On this special day, you know
    The reason why I cried.

    Now we both are happy
    We're dancin' to our song
    Now here's the time that you should know
    I've loved you all along

    When the road gets dark
    And you can no longer see
    And we are, are so far
    Just put some faith in me.

    And I want you to know
    I will never let you go.
    Because every...single...day
    Is like rain

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    beautifuldeath commented on Like Rain

    05-15-2009

    nicely written. 10 from me

    poetbaby

    05/29/2009

    thank you thank you so much

    StandingBear commented on Like Rain

    05-15-2009

    Nice, flowing verses. Bursting potential. Great write.

    kym commented on Like Rain

    05-15-2009

    its very good keep up the good work

    Artie commented on Like Rain

    05-15-2009

    Keep writing like this, and you'll have a great future.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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