Like Rain

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    I dedicated this song to my father. "Now we both are happy. We're dancin' to our song..." That part made me think of how great his wedding will be. The reason why I named it "Like Rain" is because the words from the poem gave me that idea. I realized that no matter what you do, anything can weigh you down. Including rain. I've learned in life that the good thing about walking is rain, is that no one knows you're crying. My father has never given up and he has learned that anything can happen but he shouldn't let that stop him from doing what he can for his future; marrying the girl he loves. That...is why my father is my inspiration. That...is why every single day, is "Like Rain." 

    Like Rain
    Ashley my dear
    Won't you come with me
    Theres something I wanna show you
    Remember that old tree by the fence
    I think it's waiting for us

    Everything I see
    Reminds me of you
    I just can't let you go

    When the road gets dark
    And you can no longer see
    And we are, are so far.
    Just put some faith in me.
    And I want you to know
    I will never let you go.
    Because every single day
    Is like rain

    Falling down ontop of my head
    I wasn't expecting no more
    The lateness of the hour
    Is always a dread
    The moment i've been waiting for.

    You were my best friend
    The light that lit my candle
    My soft and cuddly teddy bear
    You are my angel

    But you can't always see
    What you've done to me.
    All the exciting...memories

    When the road gets dark
    And you can no longer see.
    And we are, are so far
    Just put some faith in me

    And I want you to know
    I will never let you go
    Because every single day
    Is like rain

    I can hear it pouring down
    When every second goes by.
    And I don't hear a sound
    I look up in the sky.
    But I can't take no more
    I need you by my side
    You see the stars in the sky
    Our chance is passing by

    So i got down on one knee
    And I looked into your eyes
    On this special day, you know
    The reason why I cried.

    Now we both are happy
    We're dancin' to our song
    Now here's the time that you should know
    I've loved you all along

    When the road gets dark
    And you can no longer see
    And we are, are so far
    Just put some faith in me.

    And I want you to know
    I will never let you go.
    Because every...single...day
    Is like rain

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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