Listen to the Sunrise

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  My Grandpa Redfox lived to be 110 years old.  He was about 6 yrs old, and was in the Lakhota village during Custer's last fight.  As a child growing up, he shared stories with all of us kids.  Later, I learned they were not ust stories, but they were facts of history.
  My Grandpa also took his responsibilities of being an elder very seriously.  One of those responsibilities was storyteller, and his stories taught us all very important life lessons.  Another was confidant and question answerer.  Other members of the family would think some of my childhood questions were silly or ridiculous.  But Grandpa took every question very seriously, and never told me to go bother someone else.  I hope I can be a Grandma like that when my grandson Jude and Grand-daughter Lena get old enough to ask me questions.  And I hope one day, they will learn how to hear the sunrise, also.

Listen to the Sunrise

Its been many years since old Grandfather passed.
When I was little I never wondered how long it would last.
So many questions, all waiting to be asked.

I remember standing with him at the edge of the Badlands.
His long gray braids, and old weathered hands.
He was six years old at the Battle of Greasy Grass.
The one you all call Custer's Last Stand.

Grandpa always made time for me, when no one else would.
I asked him questions because he'd answer them like no one else could.
And he'd take the time to answer them, when no one else would.

"Grandpa, why is the sky blue?"
"The Creator wanted it to look like a jewel,
so he made it like saphire, just for me and you."
Grandpa's answers were always so cool!

Grandpa how will I know when i'm all grown-up and wise?
Grandfather looked down at me and said, "When you can hear the sun rise."
Now Grandpa was never one to fib, he never told lies,
but really now, how do you hear the sunrise?

Grandfather had been gone for many years and I still didn't know.
I'd get up early to watch the sunburst show,
and though I'd seen many a sun color and sun glow,
I'd never heard the sun make a single sound or musical note.

Then one day, my own grandchild was born.
I stood outside on that early summer morn.
amid the gold ripening of the New Mexico corn,
and behold I heard it louder than any drum or any horn.

On that day, as I stood still and closed my eyes,
and I listened with my heart as the sun began to rise.
Sure enough, I heard it to my great surprise!
If you are still, it is true, you can hear the sun rise!

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MsKrystle commented on Listen to the Sunrise

07-07-2009

Wow....very good story....You can learn alot from your elders. I always ask my dad to tell me stories of when he was younger...he has come a long way (he's not really old but I dont have any grandparents to tell me stories) I am grateful for the knowledge no matter how small it may be. I would love to live to be 110 years old as long as I am healthy, and tell stories to my great grandchildren. hopefully they will find it interesting.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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