Living is Not an Option

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Living is Not an Option

How can I look to the future,
when I see nothing?
How can I hug you,
when I feel nothing?
How can I smile,
when there is no joy for me?
How can I be happy,
if I am so sad?
How can I live,
if all I want is to die?

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Chrisjan commented on Living is Not an Option

05-28-2009

The feeling you put in to this poem, was creatively done. To die, hmm, sigh, why not, one more try.

bforibus commented on Living is Not an Option

05-28-2009

wow. i loved the emotion poured into this poem. it ranged out insecurities and doubt. i do wish it was longer and had more of a song to compliment this emotion but all in all it was a good write

Pea commented on Living is Not an Option

05-28-2009

how often I've felt like this and couldn't find the right words. I love it. I feel it. it's perfect. thank you for posting it.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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