Love for you

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    Love for you

     I just stood there frustarted
    drained and helpless
    Life wouldn't allow
    for me to come to you
    and i was forced to watch
    through this plexiglass wall.

    How you hurt and cried
    and all i could do
    was stand and watch you fall
    with me splayed against this
    damn wall!

    I knew for certain on that day
    This was love I felt!
    But I must accept and deal with
    what life has dealt

    My heart hurt so bad for you
    I only hoped you knew
    I was here and
    how much I loved and cared too!

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    LindasLife commented on Love for you

    09-28-2009

    Beautiful,you will go far.Feelings in words are great stories of ones life.God bless.
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    oreo5560

    09/28/2009

    I agree..thank you for your compliment!

    Blueroad commented on Love for you

    09-25-2009

    It's a good poem. I liked reading it. I think, poetry is something like recording the moments. And, you've done well in this regard.
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    oreo5560

    09/25/2009

    Thank you for your thoughts and i think you are right about poetry-it is like recording the moments in life..again thank you ..debbie

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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