Love

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    Love

    Love is a beautiful thing
    true love is felt
    true love is seen
    true love is undescribable

    True love is like a burst
    of energy felt within your heart, mind and soul
    The presence of your true love
    can be felt even when they are not with you

    True love is unquestionable
    there are no doubts, no fears, no sadness just pure love

    True love can make you strong
    pure love can cause no harm
    my love is unconditional

    True love can be felt hours, days, even years later
    the touch of your hand
    the warmth of your hug
    the softness of your touch

    Your love will never be forgotten
    there is no way it can ever be done
    you set the example you set the bar

    The momemts we spent together
    the laughs we shared
    the emotions we showed each other
    Nothing can be erased

    My world turned upside down
    nothing seemed right
    everything was pointless, no meaning no end I now walk this earth 
    waiting, wishing, and remembering what once was

    Our time was measured and ended too quickly but I know one day I will see you again,

    Whether in my dreams of you in another life This bond was too strong to show an end
    So I'll wait as you watch over me together we will be just you wait and see

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    spbsdude commented on Love

    10-07-2009

    True love is a many splendid thing. It is also a very beautiful thing as well. Nicely written poem. Love is such a difficult emotion to express sometimes, but you've done a great job of doing that.

    mistyblue1982

    10/19/2009

    Thanks for the comment.

    1990lh commented on Love

    10-06-2009

    nice misty i enjoyed the read i understand where u were coming from good job

    mistyblue1982

    10/19/2009

    Thank you for your comment. Positive feedback is always good!

    SuperChick76 commented on Love

    10-06-2009

    Once I again, the flow was hard to get, and some lines were too long, others too short. But it was nicely written other than that. Couple of grammar mistakes, but that happens to the best of us. nicejob, keep up the good work!

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