Luck Is Over Rated

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    Luck Is Over Rated

    Some affix luck to a turned up horse shoe,

    Rabbit’s foot, or 4-leaf-clover,

    These same few are after that pot of gold,

    Or the rainbow to lead them over.

    The blow of the dice, a newfound penny;

    It’s all in one minds eye,

    I’m not one to ponder on fate, but act

    Upon words to live by.

    My lady and I, married of 14 years;

    She feeds my heart and soul,

    The conviction we stow between us;

    Undeniably our strength without toll.

    Just a glance from those baby blues, holds

    More significance than any gold,

    A gentle touch from her soft, warm lips,

    Spring feelings that just can’t be told.

    Her heart, abundant, her smile so sweet,

    Yet a laugh that will bring out the band,

    Her mind is keen and craves adventure,

    With love and pride, by her side I stand.

    By now you’re probably wondering on the

    Heading of my proclamation,

    Where might luck fit in to these

    Intimate vows of opinion?

    A high roller may say I’m the luckiest man

    To find such an uncut gem,

    Or, fate could not have matched a

    Better couple on a whim.

    But truth be told, I don’t condone

    To all that hype and façade,

    The two of us are together by

    The hands and grace of God.

    So, you can keep all your 4-leaf-clovers,

    Horseshoes, and rabbit’s feet,

    Our hearts will meld as one, for life,

    Because it was just meant to be.

     

     

    J.G.W.

    8/7/09

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    Charlie23 commented on Luck Is Over Rated

    10-25-2009

    This is a beautiful poem, as well as a great philosophy! It sounds as though you found the one, if only everybody could be so lucky.

    Crazyeskimo commented on Luck Is Over Rated

    08-16-2009

    This is a beautiful poem. Sounds like you have an amazing woman.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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