Madness

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    Madness

    I hold off the tears of sadness for

    the fear of madness. 

    I feel it pulling with all of the knowing.

    I want to quit, but all I can do is spit.

    I’m mad, I’m sad,

    I feel that I’ve been had.

    What do I do, what do I say?

    While I hold my tears at bay.

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    LadyLuck commented on Madness

    09-21-2010

    Short but Strong! I get more confusion outta it than sadness or even madness but the madness was there a sort of rage at not knowing. Very well done
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    Ariel

    09/21/2010

    Haha thank you!

    VampireGirl666 commented on Madness

    10-09-2009

    this says alot in just a few words. i love it lol. Keep it up :)
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    Ariel

    10/09/2009

    Thanks!:)

    Cammy commented on Madness

    06-29-2009

    Short but substantive. I like the fact that it says a lot with a little. It reminded me of feelings I, too, have had. Holding back while one tries to regrip their sanity. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you. Cammy
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    Ariel

    06/29/2009

    Thanks. :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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