Pain.

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    Pain.

     Pain: I wish it not to know my name.
    Pain: simply the embodiment of thought.
    Thought: an exchange of idea in ones mind.
    Thought: an impassive wanting.
    Wanting: a secret desire.
    Wanting: a secret lie.
    Lies: are all you ever say.
    Lies: are what make up my life.
    Life: worthless.
    Life: unwanted.
    Unwanted: Pain knows no boundaries.
    Unwanted: your words.
    You: unworthy.
    You: hurt me.
    Pain: you.

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    iLuvPoetryJACOB commented on Pain.

    12-02-2009

    WOW........its gonna be a while for me to get in a good mood again....cuz now im all depressed and stuff. poems are usually emotions beautifully described on a paper. and this poem is plainly about depression. do you really want to die? it frightens me because i would never want ANYONE to feel this way......send me a private message or something....,you can talk to me..... good poem though. =]
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