Death is on my door step.

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    Death is on my door step.
    Death is on my door step,
    should i let him in?
    He comes baring news that my suffering is almost over; syth in hand he knocks on my door, asking permission to enter,
    should i let him in?

    Death is on my door step,
    the time has come to pay my dews.
    His sith at ready he awaits my hand.

    Deathm is on my door step
    the time has come;
    i open the door and take his hand.
    slender white fingers enclose my fles laden one
    he leads me away, my life becoming gray.

    Death is at me door step
    no longer does he knock
    for with him i am and with him i stay.

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    LadyLuck commented on Death is on my door step.

    09-21-2010

    That was actually very pretty... I like the peaceful thoughts that went into it. I didnt feel fear, or jubilation at death being there but just calm decision. Very well written. But dont let him take you just yet
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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