Mikes Final Goodbye

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    Mikes Final Goodbye

    It was a beautiful day
    but my family called to say
    that you were not well
    all I could think was this
    illness has been hell.

    I was silent struggling for comments,
    All I could say was may we have you
    for a life time of moments.

    my heart felt lonely and sad
    I was more mad
    He is to young to die
    This is all a lie.

    Then my mom spoke and her words were like nails
    Every word was making me feel like life fails.
    Lord take him if you must
    But this feels like a game and i just went bust.

    While on the phone that day
    My aunt called to say
    That my cousin had died
    and I just cried.

    This to you my cousin I write my final Goodbye
    Although I want this to all be a lie.
    So Mike I Love you and will never forget
    Or will I ever let your children Forget




    Love Shari




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    Bethane1978 commented on Mikes Final Goodbye

    07-21-2009

    Wow thats a beautiful tribute to Mike. Its sad. Im so sorry for your lose . You will heal though.

    christianprep commented on Mikes Final Goodbye

    07-21-2009

    great write give poem a ten and i am sorry too here about you must be sad, but don't be because there in a better place there not suffering this crool world, and someday when you go you will be with them again you just have to be pashient

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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