mind crush

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  • Angst
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  • Wordslinger
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  • Alone
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  • Love
    • stonie
    • got somethi ngdeep on my mind but too busy at work to manifest it

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    WOW, i am very suprized to have this gem stored away in my myspace blogs, i was 18 when i wrote this, 7 years ago. at the time i was still struggling with an idea of what love should be and what everyone else saw it as. i had even kept myself a virgin til i was 19 even though i could have lost it at 13 >.<. but hey, one of the things that helps make one good is how long u can keep urself pure :P

    mind crush

     one side the other,

     one side the other,

    one side the other,

    y the fuck do i even bother,

    can't even reap the fruit of another,

    for part of my mind has been punctured,

    and my mind has caused me much torture,

    please don't let me grow bitter,

    what ever the hell you do,

    don't let me grow bitter,

    cut me from these jagged tethers,

    they won't break like hemp or leather,

    and what ever mood i weather,

    my own mind i shall sever.

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    StandingBear commented on mind crush

    08-19-2009

    Put some music with this and you'll have one helluva work. Great write.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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