cars, bars, and mar

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  • stonie
  • got somethi ngdeep on my mind but too busy at work to manifest it

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this is tied in with the previous one even though it is a few years older, it's when i was really whacked out my head for alittle bit but at the same time i knew that alot of the things around me were unavoidable.

cars, bars, and mar

This has gone so, so far

 that i may never break free of the bars

 this force thats stick around, keeps me to the ground

 way back then it seemed so right

 but now i pay the price, that price is mar

 I am not sorry for the little things i did

 because you opened your mouth and sucked me in

 and i tried to make amends

 amends to you would lead to sin

 and yet i almost let it suck me in

  Stay away, fade to grey

 i can no longer live this way

 you will see what you have done

 you will see it once i won

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

stonie’s Poems (29)

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