Misunderstandings

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    Misunderstandings



    as she stands here
    disoriented and weak
    wishing u were near
    missing when things weren't so meek

    she thinks about the past
    when they'd chill in the car
    thinking those days would last
    never traveling too far

    but now there getting older
    and living separate lives
    but one is growing colder
    and the other taking dives

    one is trying to get by
    going to school living her life
    while the other wants to die
    cause she thought shed be his wife

    now one is hearing rumors
    and the other picks herself up
    there heads like tumors
    cause the pain that finally erupt

    now there far apart
    full of guilt and all alone
    a friendship now in the kart
    being pushed and dried to the bone

    she thinks she got a new friend
    that shes not needed anymore
    that what was came to an end
    and they could be besties nevermore

    the other misses her
    knowing she cant be replaced
    everything seems a blur
    wanting the pain to be erased

    but they stop talking
    and get separated
    now they go off walking
    forever separated

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    wllm commented on Misunderstandings

    09-01-2009

    Great Ths I could really relat keep it up your doing fine

    ilemar commented on Misunderstandings

    03-31-2009

    i like it but the end take out a little of the felling in it.it is a powerful one and don't stop

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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