Show me you care

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  • Love

    Show me you care

    you say you care
    but your never here
    true love is rare
    the time is near

    afraid to talk
    don't know what to do
    lets go for a walk
    but don't call me boo

    i need to know you love me
    i need to know you care
    i need to be able to see
    I'm trying to be fair

    these last few weeks
    have been so hard
    kisses on cheeks
    cut in like a shard

    dunno how you feel
    want you to open up
    dunno how to heal
    until you show me up

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    Sx9 commented on Show me you care

    12-16-2009

    so where is the commitment,do u want it or not,,,lol,great vibes,,love this work..keep inspired..ok he have to be here first,,ok..

    Bwyn commented on Show me you care

    05-18-2009

    Awww why does love have to suck so much! Iloved it especially w/ love cutting like a chard I understand completely :)

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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