Moments of heat!

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    Moments of heat!
    Numb, transitionaly awkward.
    Moving the clock forward time persists, time excedes.
    Lost in feeling, breathing deeply to regain site.
    Untraceable emotion, flashes of heat.
    Fire, sweet fire.

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    DestinedQueen commented on Moments of heat!

    11-15-2009

    What can I say?! Time flies when you're having fun! Which is why we lose track of it so often. I love the line "lost in feeling" it seems to say so much with so few words. DQ
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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