My loss, Anothers gain!

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    My loss, Anothers gain!
    Beyond Imagination, Beyond Dream.
    True Fascination is Unseen.
    Ones beauty compared to shakespearean scene.
    With out Doubt, Hardly Seen.
    Your face is all I see.

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    mikeg commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

    12-11-2009

    I see pain in your words...A longing only known by a few David. I think because I know you I have better insight on what it is you write. You just want her to notice you. It seems as though you feel hidden to her. Someone with a sharper more keen eye for passion and love will see the unseen, my friend!
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    themommyof2 commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

    11-27-2009

    very romantic for a young man. keep this up and you will go far in life in many ways.
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    DANi89Rose commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

    08-02-2009

    yea ur use of words is great very short and to the point i love ur style of writing
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    Paint commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

    07-06-2009

    again this to me seems like noticing someone and longing for them without them knowing, a secret love that aches in the heart.... like the poem shakespeare wrote about a girl's eyebrow lol. I like it.
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    BooTz commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

    06-29-2009

    i think this piece says it all with little words.it's short but u get ur point across. very good
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