Mr. Right

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    Mr. Right

     Mr.Right,Is he real? Mr.Right,I want the real deal. Mr.Right,The one that holds me tight. Mr.Right,The one that makes everything seem right. Mr.Right,The one thats there when all was wrong. Mr.Right,the one that holds me all night long. Mr.Right,The one that says im beautiful when i dont look my best. Mr.Right,The one that looks into my eyes and not at my chest. Mr.Right,The one that cares about how i feel. Mr.Right,is he real? Cause if hes not ,then what do i feel?

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    angelchaser commented on Mr. Right

    01-10-2011

    Honey, your mister right is out there, trust me. I've known you for almost two years now and you're a wonderful girl with a lot going for you. Any guy who can't see that, isn't worth your time.
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    BlissfullTerror

    01/10/2011

    awe :) thanks. You will find a true love again too :) i have faith in you. hee... that rhymed :D

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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