my best friend

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my best friend

i remember the day, that day we first met, i was in trouble at school, and my eyes they were wet. you asked me whats wrong, if i was okay, i remember, as if it was yesterday..... we were nearly inseperable, and our friendship began there, but now you are gone, and it just isnt fair. gone from this world, you took your own life, because of the pain, you couldnt handle the strife. one bullet one gun, that was all that it took did life really have, such a bad outlook? in just one moment, you ended it all, i should have been there, to help catch your fall. i miss you so much, youre gone but youre not, youll always be in my heart, i just wish you would have fought. i will never forget, the kindness you showed me, i guess in the end, thats how best friends can be.... Dedicated to S.L.D i love you and will never forget you.... thank you, for everything.... you being in my life has made me a stronger person today...... see you when its my time.... goodbye for now... my best friend

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Chaos128 commented on my best friend

07-21-2010

There are really no words for a tragedy like the one you describe. But I think you did your friend proud by this tribute to her.

leigh14

08/28/2010

it was my best friend steven but it appreciate the sentiments.... thsnk you...

Musicmynded1 commented on my best friend

04-21-2010

What more can you say.... brilliantly put my friend Leigh:)

SuSpence commented on my best friend

04-21-2010

Well this is a very touching and loving tribute to a fallen friend. I am sorry for your loss :( I was about your age when I lost my first friend to suicide and I remember the hurt, confusion, anger, and sadness. You never really get over you just learn to forgive and remember the good times. I wish you well.

girlygirl1234 commented on my best friend

04-20-2010

wow........im so sorry about oyur loss. i have a friend just like that but i know how it is too lose someone so close to you. i love you leigh. love.......... GG

Dano commented on my best friend

04-16-2010

very emotional and very honest... must have been very difficult to write... thank you for sharing

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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