My Mind

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My Mind

The adventures of dreamland are yours for a day,
Use your imagination if you can,
Use it if you will.

Your mind is a labyrnth that you must explore on your own,
your mind is a maze of intertwined passages,
that you and only you can get through with any success. 

In retrospect,
When i was little,
i used to wish that i could read read others minds. 

Now though, 
With all the heartache, pain and suffering in the world;...
Im glad I cannot.

For in the end,
That would have been the ultimate folly,
It would have torn me apart to know
that i could have just saved this person,
or that if i had just acted,
then this would not have happened to that one.

It would have been the worst mistake to happen to anyone,
So in the end... I'm glad i cant.

Well now I've allowed you into my mind and my memories,...
Take a long trip...

The adventures of dreamland are yours for a day,
Use the chance if you can.

Wanna tell me your mem'ries and what's on your mind?

 

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Darkfire commented on My Mind

05-18-2010

Yes I do, haha, sweet piece of redemption to the miseries of the world. Well written and thanks for sharing!

1990lh commented on My Mind

05-13-2010

nice write it was different and different is great

BringMeBullets commented on My Mind

03-25-2010

How precious. I love how people like you can weave imagination into their poetry. I enjoyed this, it brought a big smile to my face. Thank you for sharing.

jlandi19 commented on My Mind

03-22-2010

wow i LOVE this poem its interesting read i kinda wanted that power until you put it that way! keep it up i love it

Musicmynded1 commented on My Mind

03-04-2010

Love this aspect of writing leigh.... keep up this pace:)

leigh14

03/05/2010

thankx a bunch poet.... i really appreciate your feedback....loves Heather Leigh14

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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