My blind lover

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    My blind lover
    I seem to have met you before
    and I know it.
    I long to see your face for the first time,
    and breathe you into me.
    Your smile over the phone,
    says so much
    yet i want to see your lips move
    and tell me you love me
    and kiss me
    without warning.

    Considering your beautiful mind,
    I have yet to see your face.

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    Crush commented on My blind lover

    07-05-2009

    You are obviously a very special person. Something in your words give you away and conveys that to me. This poem is a beautiful with yourself and I feel as though I have eaves dropped. However, I am glad I did because this is so sweet. Thank u.
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    xxlheart commented on My blind lover

    03-24-2009

    beautiful poem....the only prob with online love is that the flaws are easy to hide. becareful, you only know the mind they are willing to share. be cautious with your heart, i have found they break easier than they repair.
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    Grito commented on My blind lover

    03-23-2009

    A clear, clear view, in deja vu!!!
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    stephenmichael commented on My blind lover

    03-22-2009

    very nice flow doll...You seem also to twist and speak directly at the same time... I like this. And, welcome as my newest friend:
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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