To The Lost Times Between Us

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    To The Lost Times Between Us

    And now I see you
    and no longer do I feel your warmth surround me
    or that feeling I never thought
    existed in anyone.
    And you ask me if I still love you
    and I'm not sure how to say
    that I dont think I ever did.
    And I think about what might have been
    between us
    if we both wanted it.

    I leave you
    and I turn back to see if you still stare back
    at me like lost times
    when what might have been
    between us, walked out -
    like me.

    And now I see you,
    and you offer me hours of apologies
    that I dont even feel I deserve.
    And I ask you why you took so long
    to tell me what it was that you felt,
    because I felt the same way
    at one point.

    I leave you
    and you ask others if they have seen me.
    You find me and ask me to come back
    to you, and I do.
    And I see you with the same face
    I once had, when I thought it was Love
    that I felt for you.

    And I think about what might have been
    between us
    if we both wanted it.

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    BestMonkey commented on To The Lost Times Between Us

    06-04-2009

    I liked this poem, I would say it could be a little more concise though. The rhythm throughout it was good though.

    mykhail commented on To The Lost Times Between Us

    03-06-2009

    Listen, this is truly beautiful, how old are you again? J/J! This is a fantastic poem, you express love very well and seem to have an excellent grasp on reality, we have all been here, again, beautiful! Your poetry is inspirational!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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