My Control

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    My Control

    without a method to my madness, i have pen and paper

    a childhood thought unravels on a page in rhyme

    not caring if they are teachers, lawyers, or aldermen

    the wheels start turning, a finished poem in no time

     

    i dont care what you say, i don't care what you heard

    i can write like this, or I can write like that

    each poem is the same, just with different words

    i can change my style, or my subject just like a hat

     

    i can't work the middle all the time, i fall off a lot

    i have no more control over writing, than you over breathing

    each line i write pulls me closer to knowing the plot

    to give up on my freedom of course, that is not living

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    BlacknWhite commented on My Control

    07-01-2009

    I like this! I have one that is called MY LOVER MY PEN, that sort of is similar.
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    jademelissa74 commented on My Control

    07-01-2009

    Impressive collection of phrases. I love the imagery that you used to maintain the reader interested throughout the poem. Great job! Lots of routes for discussion.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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