My grandpa

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    My grandpa

    I come from a family that
    has lost a great deal
    most important of which is my grandpa
    there i was sitting playing video games
    when i heard it
    the unmistakable sound of my
    family crying
    i went to investigate
    and found that my grandpa
    was dying
    the smell of old spice
    and the feeling of cold dying flesh
    reached my senses
    then i heard it's for the better
    and i thought i was going to loose it
    the day my grandpa passed away.

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    drewking commented on My grandpa

    01-09-2009

    nice!!like this one...

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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