MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

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    WHAEN THIS SPECIAL ONE COMES ALONG DONT TAKE HER FOR GRANDTED (AND OR HIM) YOU MAY GET A SECOND CHANCE BUT IS THE GAMBLE WORTH IT? ASK YOURSELF OR BETTER YET ASK THE ONE WHO GAVE HER...THE ANSWER IS A DEFINATE NO!YOU'LL KNOW IT,,,


    THANK TO EVERYONE FOR SO MANY GREAT WORDS OF WISDOM AND ALL THE HEART FELT POEMS

    MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

     THERE WILL COME A TIME IN YOUR LIFE
       WHEN THAT SPECIAL LOVE... EMERGES
    IN YOUR HEART YOU KNOW YOUR BLESSED
       WHEN THE DAGGER OF LOVE SURGES
    THERE IS NO OTHER DIRECTION
       FOR MY EYES TO PONDER
    HOW CAN THIS BE... SHE CHOSE ME                                         STILL IT MAKES ME WONDER
    SHE'S  REALLY REAL..NO FALSE FACE
       AT HER WORST A DELIGHTFUL PLEASURE
    WITHIN HER SELF THINKING SHE'S ALONE
       I QUIETLY STOOD AND  WATCHED HER
    COMBING HER HAIR WITHOUT A CARE
       SHE PICKED UP MY PICTURE
    WITH NO THOUGH SHE KISSED THE FRAME
       AND WHISPERED " OH HOWI LOVE YOU"
    GOD HOW DO I DESERVE THIS " ANGEL SETTING THERE"
       THESE ACTS OF LOVE SHE SHOWED ME . SUCH A    
               TENDER AFFAIR      
    AS I VENT MY DEEPEST FEELINGS ..OF EXACTLY WHAT TO SAY
       THE JOY INSIDE I CAN NOT HIDE OF
    "MY MOST SPECIAL DAY"!!!!






    A TRUTH SHARED....QUALIN


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    jademelissa74 commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

    01-22-2010

    I couldn't agree with the content more. What an intoxicating essence! I love the passion in which you have managed to compose this poem.
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    Qualin

    04/18/2010

    THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON,BEAUTIFUL SMILE,BEAUTIFUL POETRESS, DID I SAY BEAUTIFUL ....YOUR FRIEND

    connsk8 commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

    08-03-2009

    Woah, lucky guy, lucky girl...that is one of lifes most precious gifts and you are indeed fortunate to recognize it
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    Qualin

    06/16/2010

    IM RUNNING BEHIND ON REPLIES MY APPOLOGY..AND THANK YOU SO MUCH..I AM ALWAYS HONORED BY YOUR THOUGHTS..QUALIN YOUR FRIEND

    Tempy commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

    07-30-2009

    thats so beautiful, I like these two I hope you didnt give her up sounds wonderful. let it flow onto you
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    Qualin

    07/30/2009

    YEA IM AH DUMMY

    cynthiakehl commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

    07-29-2009

    You definitely have the heart and soul for love! Please keep sharing :)
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    Qualin

    06/16/2010

    YOU WROTE ONE OF THE VERY BEST POEMS ON THIS SITE..."CHRISTIANITY"...THANK YOU VERY MUCH...ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

    Sara09 commented on MY MOST SPECIAL DAY

    07-28-2009

    i like the ending! ;) do u just cum up with this in your head?
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    Qualin

    07/30/2009

    I WISH I COULD SAY YES ..BUT I HAVE TO SAY IT REALLY HAPPENED T/Y THO

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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