unconditional condition

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  • Unconditional Love

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    IN MEMORY OF A FRIEND LESLIE VENTERS WHO STILL LIVES BUT NOW IS ALONE...JUST WAITING FOR THE DAY WHEN THE LORD WILL TAKE HIM HOME ...TO BE REUNITED WITH THE ONLY LOVE HE'D EVER KNOWN...DEVOTED HUSBAND FOR SO VERY LONG....IF AND WHEN HE HAD TO LEAVE HIS WIFE'S SIDE IT WAS NECESSARY AND ONLY FOR A VERY SHORT TIME..ANTISIPATING A QUICK RETURN...IN THE POEM I STATED THREE YEARS BUT ACTUALLY IT WAS FOR AROUND 15 YEARS
    A HUSBAND FIRST THEN A FATHER AND A GRANDFATHER AND GREAT GRANDFATHER...THE WORDS GRAND...GREAT AND FATHER ARE A SMALL DEPECTION OF HIS ETERNAL LOVE FOR HIS WIFE AND DEVOTION TO HER...I HAVE ONLY KNOWN HIM FOR AROUND 15 YEARS IF EVERYONE HAD WHAT HE HAD INSIDE...THIS WOULD BE A BETTER WORLD...IT HAS BEEN A PRIVLIAGE TO HAVE KNOW HIM..

    QUALIN

     

     

    unconditional condition

    I GAZE OUT THE WINDOW KNOWING FREEDOM'S THERE
    FOR THREE YEARS NOW IVE BEEN HERE WITHOUT ONE SINGLE CARE
    FOR I KNOW YOU WOULD BE HERE JUST THE SAME IF IT WERE ME
    LOCKED WITHIN YOUR MIND OH SO HELPLESSLY
    BUT I REMEMBER YOU AND THE LOVE UNCONDITIONALLY
    UP BEFORE DAWN CARING FOR THE CHILDREN AND FOR ME
    BEAUTIFUL YOU WERE THEN AND WILL ALWAYS BE
    LOCKED WITHIN YOUR MIND HOW IT HURTS TO SEE
    EVEN THO YOU LAY THERE YOU ARE MY HEART..MY LOVE..MY PRIDE
    IT'S STILL JUST LIKE THE FIRST TIME.YOU WALKED SO PROUDLY BY MY SIDE

    GOD GAVE YOU TO ME FOR BETTER OR FOR WORST..
    LOVING YOU HAS BEEN A BLESSING JUST LIKE THE WRITTEN VERSE
    A VERTUIOUS WOMAN GRATER THAN ANY PRECIOUS STONE
    LOST IN YOUR MIND NOW YOU'LL NEVER BE ALONE
    EVERY NOW AND THEN I SEE THE GLITTER IN YOUR EYE
    AS THE FIRST TIME I WATCHED..AS YOU WENT STROLLING BY
    THAT GLIMPSE EVERY NOW I SEE THAT TWINKLE IN YOUR EYE                                                                                                                  IS WORTH MORE TO ME
    THAN ALL THE RIGHIES ONE COULD BUY
    IN SICKNESS YOUR MY LOVE
    AND IN HEALTH...LIKE THE STARS ABOVE
    SO MANY REASONS...SO MANY REASONS..FOR MY "UNCONDITINAL LOVE"...

    I'LL BE HERE MY LOVE ALWAYS BY YOUR SIDE
    I KNOW YOUR THERE SOMEWHERE WAY DOWN DEEP INSIDE 
    GOD KNOWS THE REASON... NOT FOR  ME TO UNDERSTAND 
    YOUR STILL HERE ..I CAN STILL HOLD YOUR HAND
    WHEN YOU HAVE TO LEAVE ME THERE ARE THOSE IN MY POSITION
    UNTILL THAT DAY ILL CHERRISH YOU AND MY "UNCONDITIONAL CONDITION".....QUALIN    


    JULY 26TH 2009

     

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    angle commented on unconditional condition

    06-29-2010

    These poems are very good. So far all of these are good.
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    Qualin

    07/06/2010

    WELL I THINK YOU ...YOU HILLBILLY ANGLE!!

    RareNecessity commented on unconditional condition

    03-26-2010

    This is the essence of spiritual breath. When the body is gone, the soul remains with us, every moment , every second, in the now. Love...love...love..unconditional love....Peace,love and the breath of tender pleasures sent your way. ~RN
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    Qualin

    04/18/2010

    WHAT A WONDERFUL COMMENT FROM A REAL POET,AND UNCONDITIONAL FRIEND!!!!

    MissIvy commented on unconditional condition

    02-06-2010

    A very nice and moving write, thank you for sharing this.
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    Qualin

    04/18/2010

    MISSIVY CANT THINK OF ANY THING TO SAY EXCEPT "MISSIVY" FOR IF EVERYONE HAS READ YOU IT WILL EXPLAIN WHY I SAY...MISSIVY THANKS YOUR FRIEND

    laydbak1 commented on unconditional condition

    08-11-2009

    This is a deeply touching, and passionately honest tribute and testament to loving the right one, Qualin... Good write...
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    Qualin

    04/18/2010

    COMING FROM A SUPURB WRITER I AM HONORED TO HAVE THIS CHANCE TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS AND TO HAVE PEOPLE LIKE YOU TO CALL FRIEND....FRIEND!!!

    cynthiakehl commented on unconditional condition

    07-30-2009

    Powerful write! Beautiful, each word, captured me, my heart , my emotions,....pure love.
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    Qualin

    06/12/2010

    There are those that you secretly admire,I don't guess the one this was written about has read it and, this is actually my first time,I think I will share it with his daughter...and thank you for your comment I'm honored coming from you...Your Friend ualin

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Qualin’s Poems (22)

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    WHAO ! UNTO YOU DOCTOR 18 08/19/2010
    THE UNDISPUTED KING 8 08/16/2010
    CLOSED FOR REPAIR 16 08/07/2010
    The Squeeze Box Boy 16 08/01/2010
    PEPPIE SAYS HELLO 9 07/28/2010
    DON'T MESS WITH FAT LUCY 14 07/25/2010
    "CAN'T YOU JUST FEEL IT" 6 07/20/2010
    ON PREASTERS LAKE 25 06/11/2010
    IF YOU EVER SEE AN ELEPHANT!!!!! 15 05/02/2010
    DON'T FORGET THE MILK AND BREAD 4 04/30/2010
    OLE' MULESKINNERS.
    ...JACKASS    		 6 04/29/2010
    THE LORD OUR FRIEND...CHRI
    ST JESUS    		 7 04/27/2010
    A LOVE THAT'S MEANT TO BE 7 04/23/2010
    THE DAY MY DADDY PRAYED 11 02/22/2010
    THE WIND SURLEY BLOWS 3 02/21/2010
    HERE ON "OLE GLORY" 4 01/21/2010
    A VERY SPECIAL FRIEND 14 08/05/2009
    having you in my site 5 08/01/2009
    PASSION OF THE MOMENT 6 07/29/2009
    MY MOST SPECIAL DAY 6 07/28/2009
    unconditional condition 8 07/26/2009
    ESOTERIC TEARS 7 07/25/2009
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