My poor baby, you mustdie

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  • Letting Go

    My poor baby, you mustdie

    With scorching hatred I want to say goodbye
    Like a mother losing her first born
    Giving it up willingly
    This part of you and I
    The universal love of a parent
    I know you understand if you have lived
    This child that I bear
    Has more life than I
    Consumes me on a molecular level
    Having found my acceptance
    it easily takes up residence
    complete with luggage
    and settles in to my split level condocranium
    My insanity is very special to me
    We love each other so much
    But a compromise is necessary
    The tapeworm of darkness and fear must die
    Then I will kill hopelessness myself

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    Merlyn commented on My poor baby, you mustdie

    02-22-2011

    This one is very disturbing. My prayer is sending the Light your way. And even in the darkness of this one, I see that you have hope. Faith hope and Love. The best things in life really are free.Your style is quite good, in my opinion. Glad to find you here. Write on, brother!
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    rippeyrip

    02/22/2011

    if I dont do this I feel empty. this flows from me and satisfies every nerve

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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