Pathway To the Stars

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Pathway To the Stars

Floating from petal to petal
invisible wings beat the air.
Heavy laden with natures' raw beginnings.
As though hanging between the notes
of a beautiful melody.
Dancing in time with the winds.
Tears of joy and wonder flow.
This can not be real..to perfect.
As a crimson sky bids us farewell
all is removed from view.
Then the cold blanket of night brings...
the new gifts

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Merlyn commented on Pathway To the Stars

02-11-2011

Very nice. Tender ,sweet appreciation of life's beauty. Seen through and artistic eye. Depth not left unnoticed. Thank you for sharing.

rippeyrip

02/11/2011

thank u

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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