My Secret Love

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My Secret Love

I have a secret love
but no one knows
Except me
i will never tell
for he is mine and no one elses
you can't have him
but does he like me
i need to know
Could he like me?
Maybe but i need to know
i need him to like me
because, i like him back
i know he does
I must find out
i have to know before its to late
But mabey he doesn't like me
but, i think he does
so i walk toward his locker my mind racing
i must find out before he slips through my fingers
i dont want him to leave
But what if he doesn't like me back?

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angelchaser commented on My Secret Love

04-27-2010

Only one way to find out...GO FOR IT!! Just always be yourself, never change to try to impress someone. if people can't accept you for who you are...they're not worth your time. A nicely written poem once again.

Cindy80 commented on My Secret Love

04-22-2010

I so like the way you wrote and ain't love something to hold you back from hate

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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