new start

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new start

As a baby is born it is given a clean slate
So shall i be with this new name
i am happy to not be noticed

The best part is being able to let my guard down
slip past your fingers
free of the past
free to be m again
I can do all this with just a new name

So i shall slip under the radar
find my new legs and live this new life

I do this because of you
you messed up
you hurt me to where i didnt want to exist
knowing you could find me
at the click of a button


So i shall be able to live anew
with a renewed passion
a new fire to my soul


I am my own secretkeeper....

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Laubster commented on new start

01-26-2011

I agree with brokenhearted. Keep writing, singing. I'll keep reading your work.

brokenhearted11 commented on new start

01-06-2011

i like it, though short and sweet, the access to a newfound alibi is highly satisfactory. being someone new has always been a great idea of humans, because it gives you what you hadnt before: freedom. keep writing!!!

kpeery09 commented on new start

01-06-2011

I like this one, its very nice and description is very well put. I give you 10 for this. Keep up the good work. :)

Marsink commented on new start

12-28-2010

We may at times invite trajedy or contribute to our own problems by default. (guilty) I hope this person you're needing a rest from is not me, lol! I hope this beginning is very good for you and poetry has its way with your heart (good poetry, that is). A great declaration of newfound freedom in this cyberworld! Applause building!

PoetWithCancer commented on new start

12-27-2010

Even on the Internet, behind the shield of pseudonyms--actual anonymity--we can be hurt. Even though our names are not usually out front on the Internet, our hearts often are. You capture and express this truth well. 10 from me. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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