new start

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    new start

     As a baby is born it is given a clean slate
    So shall i be with this new name
    i am happy to not be noticed

    The best part is being able to let my guard down
    slip past your fingers
    free of the past
    free to be m again
    I can do all this with just a new name

    So i shall slip under the radar
    find my new legs and live this new life

    I do this because of you
    you messed up
    you hurt me to where i didnt want to exist
    knowing you could find me
    at the click of a button


    So i shall be able to live anew
    with a renewed passion
    a new fire to my soul


    I am my own secretkeeper....

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    Laubster commented on new start

    01-26-2011

    I agree with brokenhearted. Keep writing, singing. I'll keep reading your work.
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    brokenhearted11 commented on new start

    01-06-2011

    i like it, though short and sweet, the access to a newfound alibi is highly satisfactory. being someone new has always been a great idea of humans, because it gives you what you hadnt before: freedom. keep writing!!!
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    kpeery09 commented on new start

    01-06-2011

    I like this one, its very nice and description is very well put. I give you 10 for this. Keep up the good work. :)
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    Marsink commented on new start

    12-28-2010

    We may at times invite trajedy or contribute to our own problems by default. (guilty) I hope this person you're needing a rest from is not me, lol! I hope this beginning is very good for you and poetry has its way with your heart (good poetry, that is). A great declaration of newfound freedom in this cyberworld! Applause building!
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    PoetWithCancer commented on new start

    12-27-2010

    Even on the Internet, behind the shield of pseudonyms--actual anonymity--we can be hurt. Even though our names are not usually out front on the Internet, our hearts often are. You capture and express this truth well. 10 from me. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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