Rainbow Sunset

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just thought of colorful things n this came to me..ty cherry for ur help

Rainbow Sunset

 All she saw as she gazed out at the sky were the colors of her life,
Memories of a past she would rather forget and a presnt she wished desperately to change

Reds and Oranges of her triumphs and celebrations
Blues and blacks of downfall after downfall, sadness after sadness
yet and still the calming serinity of the yellows and greens still brought the peace she craved

Alas purple had always illuded her

The color of her starving heart which longed for the love and affection for which it was denied, for which it could never have, could never reach out and grab; a feeling that left her warm with the knowledge that she was safe and cared for

A feeling she deserved

Then all at once her world was melted and merged into one,
Reds
Oranges
Blacks
Blues
Greens
Yellows
And yes even purples

All given to her by freinds she had never known were hers and sisters from all over, all pouring the love and suport she needded into the mass of colors mending them together until a rainbow stood in it's place

And as she looked out on the night sky that seemed so much clearer than she remembered her heart seemed to burst from its very seams...

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Laubster commented on Rainbow Sunset

01-26-2011

Great writing, singing. Keep it up. I'll keep reading your writing, I promise you that.

Rygar commented on Rainbow Sunset

01-16-2011

Your writing has improved quite a bit! Keep it up hun! :-)

thecross commented on Rainbow Sunset

01-07-2011

colors surround us in the illuminating world positive and negative we must grasp them and artistically use them to color the canvass how we seem fit, well done

brokenhearted11 commented on Rainbow Sunset

01-06-2011

now this one, seems much more like a poem!! haha i love the line about her starving heart, thats such a good line! good job, keep writing

Marsink commented on Rainbow Sunset

12-28-2010

That is so sweet to show what is nearly unspeakable joy about your good news!! This really touched me for the candor and innocence portrayed: a beautiful write of youthful exhuberance! applause building!!! (I agree with PWC below about the font size: go with #3 or #4 for us blind folk)

singinggrace

12/31/2010

ok srry guuys

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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